The Effects of Drugs
A drugs is a medicine that can make the users become addicted of it. The users will want to try and try it again and very difficult to stop it. In the past, the doctors used this medicine as sedative medicine and painkillers in a certain dose. Nowadays, a drugs is used in the wrong use and in the wrong way , not only the adult people consumes it wrongly but also the teenagers.
A drugs has many negative effects. It can damage our health in physical, emotion, and in attitudes. A drugs effects for the physical condition: user’s eyes will be concave, their face will be pale, their lips will be black, they can’t take a poop currently, and they will get stomachache without the cause.
Drug also influential with emotion. Someone who consumes drug will be sensitive, easier become angry, and they will lose their appetite. The effects for the attitude: they will be lazy, they will get headache, they will like doing theft, and they love being alone.
It can be concluded that a drugs is a dangerous medicine. It is the reason why the government works hard to stop this drug. The young generations have to keep them self from that drug, and we also have to try to remind our friends to be more careful. It has the bad effects for the body, health, and for the future. So, say no to drug! If you want to have a good future.
that is good essay cha.
BalasHapuswould be better if you add some pics.
just keep writing dude!!
that's why i never want to try them.
BalasHapusDont use colon (:) when write in formal writing. Change the colon with to be like is or are.
BalasHapusthey can’t take a poop currently, --> in formal writing, you are not allowed to use apostrophe. the correct one is "they cannot take....."
It can be concluded that a drugs is a dangerous medicine. --> drugs without "s" if singular.
so fa so good. better next time.
say no to drug....
BalasHapusit would be better for title of your essay....
Hmmm....good icha.
BalasHapusAccording to me,you should put some pictures; it's better.
Keep writing^6